Score: 7

"Truly amazing"

submission: Chaos Of Mana

date: February 12, 2009

It was a great game, very fun to play. I truly enjoyed going through it. My favorite part had to be the llama races, very fun, i got my first 300 gold that way xD lasted me the rest of the game. The wive system was interesting, although i hope you meant what they were saying as more of a joke and not an actual evaluation of how you felt women were, the graphics were interesting, the gameplay style was well done, and some of the battles were kind of a challenge. I can't wait for the next game!

Score: 10

"cool game."

submission: PPGD: Battle in Megaville

date: January 7, 2009

For those of you playing this game who do not know, this game is in fact based off of a sadly short webcomic done by snafu_comics.com. the comic is a parody of many cartoons that were shown on cartoon network. Oh, and bell is some kind of clone.

but yeah, this game is pretty good, unfortunately it was too short. you only fought through a enemies and boom, it was done. I was hoping that maybe you could include a bunch of enemies from the comic that weren't really ever portrayed in battle.

ugh i'm tired, so i guess, that is all.

Score: 8

"It's..interesting"

submission: Lemn

date: December 12, 2008

It's very well done, although the art is basic and detail isn't exactly very deep.

For people like the guy below me, Stickel3, Mirrored, does not mean stolen, it just means he's parodying it. Which isn't wrong, although he really should say what he's "mirroring"...

Score: 10

"Excellent"

submission: The Last Minute Shopper

date: December 9, 2008

Quite a well done piece. Although the flash in the beginning (i don't know if it was my computer or not) kept making small pauses. The art was great, set the tone for it. The voice acting was superb. Next time perhaps make a longer work, something lasting 6 or more minutes. You seem to be making a great start on newgrounds I can't wait to see what's next!

Score: 7

"go go dk!"

submission: Prime Minister Address

date: December 1, 2008

It was amusing but it was rather difficult to understand the prime minister. The music was just a little too loud lol. I know it was supposed to be some amusing satirical bit but honestly i coudn't really hear what he was going on about. Well, I'm sure it was fine otherwise.

Score: 10

"crap..."

submission: How to be leet.

date: December 1, 2008

I failed by your movie i'm not 1337 ='( but yeah, for guys out there like shaolin dave who think 1337 is some kind of way of saying you're elite, you're wrong. leet is a language made by using everything other than letters to write :D like the common use of the numbers 1 for L 2 for S 3 for E 4 for A and so on and so forth. It's nice to know that someone out there wants to teach everyone how to be leet :D now i don't only have to speak it, i can live it too! thank you master leet!

Score: 7

"Fun!"

submission: Cat Office Ch.1 p.2

date: October 7, 2008

I'll just review here instead of the same review on both.

Okay so basically right off the bat i could tell that you cared quite a bit about this project, you seem to have put a lot of effort into it. The main issue with it is the voice actors aren't believable when voicing their characters and sound amateurish. That of course is something that will more than likely dissipate over time as they get more and more into their roles.

Secondly i mean i don't really have much of a problem with it, but when they the picture of them the picture looked more like a sketch than anything. It didn't really give the appearance of a picture taken by a camera lol, but of course i guess the drawing will evolve along with the voice acting.(god i hope it does)

A third thing, shouldn't this planet by chance feel a little more futuristic since you seem to have based the world loosely around the star fox universe, so when they get to the supermarket it should look more like it's still far into the future, you know just make it look a little more futuristic but also have some tones from our era mixed in so that it's recognizable.

okay now for the good things lol, overall i enjoyed the movie, it isn't the best, nor is it the worst i've seen. But i can see that you had an amazing idea here and you are enthusiastic about it's coming to fruition. I found the rpg feel appealing overall, how you tried to involve the viewer into it more. I also enjoy the fact that you used some building from chrono trigger for the inside (kind of looked like an inn to me).

Now i just want you to know, that people will bash this thing down over and over again no doubt, there are many morons online. And they don't know a good work with excellent potential when they see one. Of course i'm sure you will get many great reviews, but yeah, bad ones always come with it. So basically what i' trying to get at here is that you shouldn't let people get you down. I want to see how this goes, i want to see your creation reach it's climax!

Goodluck with it all i can't wait to see it. Don't give up!

Score: 10

"Cool"

submission: Shinukoto!

date: October 7, 2008

I get what you were going for, the humor aside it was true. She tried and tried so hard to die and when the time came for her to go she was sad, she didn't want to die.

You presented the general way of a suicidal person, almost all the time when the person commits the act and there is that time before they believe they will die, they begin to want to live again. You presented this in a different manner than usual, but you presented it well. What is the sad thing that how you portrayed it is how people generally feel about friends who are talking about suicide, that yeah it's a bad thing, but you laugh at it and don't think it'll happen.

It was funny and interesting and ended in sadness. You provoked emotions from both ends of the spectrum and you did that well. You are an excellent artist and have an a perfect feel for humanity. I will await, with baited breath, your next creation.

sincerely,

Glumerlink

ps. Good choice on song, you have a good mind for direction.

Score: 9

"Well done"

submission: Ge.ne.sis: Alpha Demo

date: September 21, 2008

Disease, honestly...okay instead of me ranting and getting myself all riled up about what's wrong with him and how big of an idiot he is i will talk about how great this is. It seems like a wonderful game possibility. The story has great potential I enjoyed the whole idea of a world of dreams, although it needs work, you might be able to turn it into something good. The graphics were well drawn, and the battle system felt like a strange version of FFT(Final Fantasy Tactics, not advance, the real original hard as hell version) and was interesting with the whole orb system.

I suggest if you get the chance to modify something, when i attacked with my characters and i used orbs but then i decided not to use an orb with that attack and clicked it off i actually lost orbs from my total orb count instead of them being added back to it. Another thing is that perhaps you could edit the storyline so that it feels a little more...beyond, if she is swept away in such a fashion, shouldn't she act like it? instead of being forceful and suddenly accepting the new reality shouldn't she question it more, be scared, or perhaps angry in someway at the lack of answers? then when that beast attacks her shouldn't you show a little bit of struggling with these weapons since she is seemingly unaccustomed with them, or perhaps shouldn't there be some kind of strange magical happening foretold when she picks up the weapons and she "Suddenly feels a strange power flow through her these weapons growing light within her hands and her body suddenly filling with the ability to move with ease whilst holding these weapons." have some way of explaining how she is able to use them.

You have a well done game here, i cannot wait to see as it moves along in it's growth. I'll watch all the while =).

Goodluck,

Glum.

Score: 10

"holy wow"

submission: Nico-do 2nd - Kirbomix~

date: September 19, 2008

Quite an amazing piece of art you've create. Yeah i realize that you were just messing around, but wow it is well done. And besides, i doubt professional singers could have made it sound as great as you guys did. Although i'm probably guess you're not ever going to read this, and hell i seriously truly doubt that you will ever reply to it but i might as well say it anyway y'know? You are one of my favorite artists around here. You truly have developed a style all your own. Hopefully you don't give up on this hobby of yours anytime soon, i'd love to see what you produce in the future. Oh, and you other guys(ahem, gals) that did this too, awesome job, no piece of art can be created solely by one person, it requires every piece of the puzzle else it would never function as magnificently as it could. (yeah yeah, i know probably me and about 4 other people are going to spend time reading this, none of which a part of the artists here but hey had to try, oh and sorry guys for not including all the great things i could say about you, but honestly, come on there's just not enough characters i'd need around 50,000 characters to type this properly).