I'll just review here instead of the same review on both.

Okay so basically right off the bat i could tell that you cared quite a bit about this project, you seem to have put a lot of effort into it. The main issue with it is the voice actors aren't believable when voicing their characters and sound amateurish. That of course is something that will more than likely dissipate over time as they get more and more into their roles.

Secondly i mean i don't really have much of a problem with it, but when they the picture of them the picture looked more like a sketch than anything. It didn't really give the appearance of a picture taken by a camera lol, but of course i guess the drawing will evolve along with the voice acting.(god i hope it does)

A third thing, shouldn't this planet by chance feel a little more futuristic since you seem to have based the world loosely around the star fox universe, so when they get to the supermarket it should look more like it's still far into the future, you know just make it look a little more futuristic but also have some tones from our era mixed in so that it's recognizable.

okay now for the good things lol, overall i enjoyed the movie, it isn't the best, nor is it the worst i've seen. But i can see that you had an amazing idea here and you are enthusiastic about it's coming to fruition. I found the rpg feel appealing overall, how you tried to involve the viewer into it more. I also enjoy the fact that you used some building from chrono trigger for the inside (kind of looked like an inn to me).

Now i just want you to know, that people will bash this thing down over and over again no doubt, there are many morons online. And they don't know a good work with excellent potential when they see one. Of course i'm sure you will get many great reviews, but yeah, bad ones always come with it. So basically what i' trying to get at here is that you shouldn't let people get you down. I want to see how this goes, i want to see your creation reach it's climax!

Goodluck with it all i can't wait to see it. Don't give up!

I get what you were going for, the humor aside it was true. She tried and tried so hard to die and when the time came for her to go she was sad, she didn't want to die.

You presented the general way of a suicidal person, almost all the time when the person commits the act and there is that time before they believe they will die, they begin to want to live again. You presented this in a different manner than usual, but you presented it well. What is the sad thing that how you portrayed it is how people generally feel about friends who are talking about suicide, that yeah it's a bad thing, but you laugh at it and don't think it'll happen.

It was funny and interesting and ended in sadness. You provoked emotions from both ends of the spectrum and you did that well. You are an excellent artist and have an a perfect feel for humanity. I will await, with baited breath, your next creation.

sincerely,

Glumerlink

ps. Good choice on song, you have a good mind for direction.

Disease, honestly...okay instead of me ranting and getting myself all riled up about what's wrong with him and how big of an idiot he is i will talk about how great this is. It seems like a wonderful game possibility. The story has great potential I enjoyed the whole idea of a world of dreams, although it needs work, you might be able to turn it into something good. The graphics were well drawn, and the battle system felt like a strange version of FFT(Final Fantasy Tactics, not advance, the real original hard as hell version) and was interesting with the whole orb system.

I suggest if you get the chance to modify something, when i attacked with my characters and i used orbs but then i decided not to use an orb with that attack and clicked it off i actually lost orbs from my total orb count instead of them being added back to it. Another thing is that perhaps you could edit the storyline so that it feels a little more...beyond, if she is swept away in such a fashion, shouldn't she act like it? instead of being forceful and suddenly accepting the new reality shouldn't she question it more, be scared, or perhaps angry in someway at the lack of answers? then when that beast attacks her shouldn't you show a little bit of struggling with these weapons since she is seemingly unaccustomed with them, or perhaps shouldn't there be some kind of strange magical happening foretold when she picks up the weapons and she "Suddenly feels a strange power flow through her these weapons growing light within her hands and her body suddenly filling with the ability to move with ease whilst holding these weapons." have some way of explaining how she is able to use them.

You have a well done game here, i cannot wait to see as it moves along in it's growth. I'll watch all the while =).

Goodluck,

Glum.

little issues here. IT isn't very clean in that it sounds a little staticy at some parts. in others it feels like mistakes are being made. I suggest going for some original works ionstead of going off of some older classical music by the greats. you have talent yes, but still you should try to be more original. it's worked for you in the past. say what's in your heart.

Amazingly done, with every new submission comes a new hope that you may top yourself once again. And so with this beautiful piece of music you have. It's impressive, although it does require work, i do believe you can truly make it as an artist if you keep trying.

You have talent, now let's see that talent put to work!

It's a pity, You seem to have really cared. You did a great job with this song. I'm sorry she left you mate, but as the saying goes there are always more fish in the sea :). Although i guess it just doesn't really work that way in your head when you think you've found someone truly great and they leave. I wish you the best of luck. And i hope you can find love again soon.